四级培训基础班写作2--我的讲义

四级培训基础班写作2--我的讲义
四级培训基础班写作2--我的讲义

四级培训基础班作文2

结构意识的培养和行文思路的提炼

1. 应试作文仍然应该保持三段式的作文模式,即开头段、中间段和结尾段。(注:详略得当,开头段和结尾段2-3句。展开段4-5句。)

2. 每段话都可以遵循这样的模式,即主题句+展开句。

3.针对不同类型的作文,展开作文的思路也略有不同,有可能是从现象描述展开,有可能是观点阐述展开。(七类四级常考作文类型)

4.在审题完毕之后就应该整理好作文思路,然后列出提纲,有的放矢。

开头段(opening paragraph)

开头段虽短,但却是文章成败的关键,举足轻重。该段目的在于引出文章要探讨的核心问题和现象,从而起到统领全文的作用。因此,开头段,主要用于引入文章主题、介绍相关背景(原因、影响、结果等)并引导正文内容。一般情况下不对内容进行深入的探讨和总结,两三句点题即可。

开头段之句式参考

一、描述现象

1. Nowadays, it has already become a common phenomenon /Currently it is not a rare phenomenon/occurrence that college students apply for a credit card. 现在,大学生办信用卡已经非常常见。

现如今,在新生入学时好几个家长打包小包簇拥着一个孩子已经变得非常常见。Nowadays,it has been a common occurrence that on the enrolling day of a college, almost every freshman is crowded around by several relatives who are holding all kinds of packages, big and small.

2. The popularity of taking civil service exams has boomed in China with increasing number of graduates leaving university.随着越来越多的毕业生离开大学校园,公务员考试在中国成为了大热门。

在如今的大学校园,大学生在宿舍里做小生意已经成为了大热门。

The popularity of doing business in the dormitory has boomed in today’s campus

数字化产品在中国尤其是在年轻人群众成为了大热门。

The popularity of digital products has been boomed in China, especially among the youngsters.

随着环保意识的不断增强,低碳生活在中国正在成为大热门。

The popularity of the so-called low-carbon life has boomed in China with the continuous increase in people’s environmental awareness.

3. It is known to all that trash disposal is very crucial to our daily life, especially in big cities.众所周知,垃圾处理对我们的日常生活非常重要,尤其是在大城市中。

众所周知,春节是中国一年中最重要的节日,而年夜饭则是欢庆春节最重要的一个环节/节目。It is known to all that the Spring Festival is the most important day of the year for all the Chinese people, while the dinner on the eve of the Spring Festival is in the same way the most significant activity/segment to celebrate the special occasion.

4. In recent years, there has been a dramatic increase in the number of school dropouts in the countryside. 近年来,农村辍学人数急剧上升。

最近几年,明星代言虚假广告的数量急剧上升。

Recently, there has been a considerable increase/rise in the number of stars making false advertisement.

近来,在家里吃年夜饭的家庭数量急剧下降,尤其是在大城市。

Lately, there has been a sharp decrease in the number of families taking dinner on New Year’s Eve at home, especially in big cites.

5. Thanks to the development of China’s economy and its opening up to the world, Chinese students are confronted with multiple choices when it comes to selecting schools.由于中国经济的发展和改

革开放的政策,中国学生现在在选择学校时可以有很多选择。

由于生活水平的不断提升,中国人民现在在选择年夜饭的地点时可以有很多选择。

Thanks to the continuous/sustained improvement in people’s living conditions, Chinese people are faced with numerous choices in selecting the place to have family reunion dinner.

由于互联网的普及,人们在购物时可以有很多选择。

With the popularization of the Internet, people now are confronted with a variety of choices when it comes to selecting the way of shopping.

二、引出问题

1. Recently, China has banned all supermarkets, department stores and shops offering plastic bags for free, which has caused wide attention. 最近,中国已经禁止了所有超市、商场和商店提供免费的塑料袋,这引起了广泛的关注。

2. When it comes to what is the better way to get the daily news, there is no complete agreement among people. Some people take it for granted that the Internet is the best source of daily news. However, others maintain that newspaper should be regarded as a better source. 提起获取日常新闻更好的方式,大家还没能达成一致。有人理所当然地认为网络是获取新闻的最佳方式,而其他人仍然认为报纸是更好的消息来源。

提起在哪里吃年夜饭的问题,大家现在的看法出现了分歧,有人理所当然地认为应该在家里吃,而很多人则认为到酒店吃也是一个不错的选择。

When it comes to where is the best place to have dinner on new year’s eve, there is no complete agreement. Some people take it for granted that it should be taken at home, while quite a few people assume that hotel should also be regarded as a nice choice.

中间段

中间段是一篇作文的正文,其作用是对主题进行解释说明和论证。本段应该包含明确的主题句(Topic Sentence/TS)。TS是提出段落的主题、概括段落中心思想或反映考生写作意图的一个概括性句子。它是段落发展的依据并且规定段落的发展方向。TS的作用举足轻重,是作文的主脉,是亮点,也是老师给分的要素之一。紧随主题句之后的展开句可以通过列事实、举例子、描述细节或给出证据等方式来扩展。

(PS:中间段在展开的过程当中,一定要注意上下文的衔接,也就是所谓的连贯问题。)

中间段之句式参考

一、引入原因

1. There are many factors explaining/accounting for/attributing to this phenomenon. First of

all/Above all, … Moreover, … Besides, …有很多因素导致了这一现象

2. There are a large number of reasons for this social phenomenon, but in general, they come down to three major ones.导致这种这会现象的原因有很多,但总体来说,主要有三点。

3. The reasons for this phenomenon mainly lie in the following two aspects.这一现象的原因主要在于以下两个方面。

4. The extravagant spending is mainly caused by/due to the following factors. 过度消费主要是由以下因素或原因引起。

5. But what lead to the conflict between parental hopes and personal ideals?但是,是什么导致了父母期望和孩子的理想之间的冲突呢?

二、引入方法

1. The following measures can be taken to reduce campus waste. 下列措施可以用来减少校园浪费。

2. Therefore/Taking the above-mentioned into consideration, it is high time that we took effective measures to improve public morals.因此/考虑到以上因素/综上所述,是时候采取有效措施提高公

共道德了。

考虑到它的积极意义,是时候采取积极措施来倡导低碳生活了。

Taking its positive effects into account, it is high time we took active measures to advocate a

low-carbon life.

3. In order to solve the problem, both parents and children should pay their efforts. 为了解决这一冲突,父母和孩子双方都要付出努力。

为了缓解能源压力,政府和个人需要齐心协力。

In order to ease the energy pressure, the government and the individuals need to make concerted efforts.

4. Considering the seriousness of this problem, effective measures should be taken to protect us against noise. 考虑到问题的严重性,应该采取有效的措施来保护我们免受噪音的干扰。

考虑到该问题的严峻性和紧迫性,应该采取必要措施来帮助孩子,不要让他们一事无成。Taking the seriousness and the urgency of this problem into consideration/account, necessary measures should be taken to protect our children against ending up with nowhere.

5. Obviously, it is necessary to take some effective precautions to reduce this phenomenon. 显然,有必要采取有效的预防措施来减少这种现象。

三、列举原因

1. Among all these reasons, the enrollment expansion of universities plays a very

vital/significant/crucial/important role.在所有的这些原因中,高校扩招起着很关键的作用。

在所有这些原因中,中国自改革开放以来/自70年代以来推行的计划生育政策扮演着最为主要的角色。

Among all these reasons, the One-child Policy that China has put forward since 1970s plays the most significant role.

2. More and more people become aware that those disasters have much/a lot to do with what we have done to the earth. 越来越多的人开始意识到,这些灾难的发生和我们人类对地球的所作所为有很大关系。

此外,对孩子的溺爱从某种程度上来说和生活水平的不断提升也有一定的关系。

What’s more, the phenomenon of parents spoiling children has, to some degree/extent, something to do with the ever-growing living conditions of people.

3. This leads to/results in a decreased chance for any individual graduate to find a job. 这使得大学毕业生找工作的机会减少了。

(生活水平的提升使得孩子们理所当然地认为父母可以满足他们的一切愿望。要什么便有什么成为了他们的普遍心态。)自己动手做事的机会变少使得孩子自身动手和办事能力的下降。(Due to the enhancement of living standards, children take for granted that parents can fulfill all their wishes. It has become a common thought that I can have whatever I ask for.) This leads to a decreased chance for them to do things by themselves, which, in this way, further decrease/reduce their ability to run their own errands, no matter big or small.

4. Poor parents in rural areas cannot afford the high education for children, which becomes a main reason for their children’s getting poor in the future. 在农村,贫穷的父母没有钱让他们的孩子接受高等教育,这成为日后这些孩子变穷的原因。

在父母眼中,孩子没有能力去做好事情,而这便又成为了导致这一现象的另一原因。

In the eyes of parents, children are incapable of doing things perfectly by themselves, which becomes another reason for this phenomenon.

5. Due to/Because of the poor Internet administration and weak network security, our information might be open, stolen or sold.由于网络管理的欠缺和网络安全的薄弱,我们的信息可能比公开、偷窃或出售。

四、列举方法

1. To begin with, attending collective activities is an effective way to relieve pressure. 首先,参加集体活动是缓解压力的一个有效方法。

首先,在日常生活中节电节水是节约能源的有效方法/第一步。

Above all, saving water and electricity in our daily life is the first step to save energy.

2. An optimistic, positive mind is indispensible in the process of pursuing your ideal. 乐观、积极的心态在你追求理想的过程中是不可或缺的。

在倡导低碳生活的过程中,坚定的信念是不可或缺的。

A strong mind is indispensible in the course of living a low-carbon life.

3. We should learn to be tolerant and consider more for others, which is necessary for group living. 应该学会容忍和多为他人考虑,这对于集体生活来说是必须的。

不需要光亮时及时关灯并尽可能使用节能灯,对于低碳生活而言是也是必须的。

Turn off the lights when we don’t need them and use energy-saving lamps as far as possible, which is also a necessity for low-carbon life.

4. In addition, we can turn to the teachers and students around us for help. 此外,我们可以求助于周围的老师和同学。

此外,我们还可以求助于大众交通工具。

Furthermore, we can also turn to the public transport for help.

5. There is no immediate solution to the problem of energy shortage, but our small economical behaviors in daily life might be quite helpful/beneficial. 能源短缺问题并没有立竿见影的解决方法,但是我们的日常节约行为可能会带来很大的帮助。

对于很多父母溺爱孩子的这一问题没有立竿见影的解决方法,但是父母观念的转变可能会带来很大的帮助。

There is no immediate solution to the problem of parents spoiling their children, but the transition of parent’s concept of loving children can be quite helpful.

父母疼爱孩子本来无可厚非,但父母疼爱孩子的方式需要发生转变。

五、说明优点或影响

1. Undoubtedly, college students can benefit a lot from physical exercise. 毫无疑问,大学生能够从体育锻炼中获得很多好处。

毫无疑问,大学生能够从在宿舍做小买卖获得一些好处。首先,它可以从某种程度上帮助该学生实现经济上的独立。

There is no doubt that college students can benefit from doing business in the dormitory. To begin with, it can, to certain degree, help the student become financially independent.

2. Pet’s service does good to both the society and the individual. 宠物服务既有益于社会也有益于个人。

3. As everyone sees, it has brought considerable benefits to people’s work and life. 正如大家看到的,它给人们的工作和生活带来了巨大的好处。

4. Without any doubt, it will produce profound/far-reaching/remarkable effect/influence on people’s life. 毫无疑问,它将会对人们的生活产生深远的/显著的影响。

毫无疑问,数字化产品的诞生和普及对现代人的生活、工作和学习都带来了深远的影响。Undoubtedly, the emergence and popularization of digital products have produced far-reaching influence on the life, work and study of modern people.

5. It is obvious that physical exercise is very beneficial/favorable to the healthy development of college students.显然,体育锻炼对大学生的身体健康发展非常有益。

可以看出,在宿舍做生意对于锻炼大学生的社交能力/交际能力非常有益,通过这种方式,他能够接触到不同年级、不同专业的各类同学。

It can be seen that doing business in the dormitory is quite beneficial to one’s communicative competence, through which, he can come into contact with a great many students of difference

grades and majors.

六、说明缺点或危害

1. Noise brings great harm to our daily lives. 噪音给我们的日常生活带来了很大危害。

如果处理不得当,在宿舍开店也会导致非常严重的后果。

If handled in an inappropriate way, running a business in the dorm can bring great harm.

2. Psychological problems are likely to lead to very serious results. 心理问题可能会导致非常验证的后果。

3. Moreover, one’s violating public morality not only invades others’ benefits but also is very harmful to himself. 而且,违反公共道德不仅侵犯他人的利益也会伤害到自己。

4. If this trend continues, it will exert undesirable/disastrous effect/influence. 如果这种趋势持续下去的话,将会带来不良的/灾难性的影响。

5. On the other hand/As every coin has two sides, private tutoring has also some

disadvantages/drawbacks/weak points. 然而/正如每个硬币都有两面,私人家教也有缺点。

七、举例论证

1. Hanxin of the Han Dynasty is a typical example of those who have patience. 汉朝的韩信就是一个典型的有耐心的人。

2. A case in point is the important role of patience in English study. 一个典型的例子就是耐心在英语学习中的重要作用。

3. Let’s take finding a job as an/another example. 让我们以找工作为一个(另一个)例子。

4. There are too numerous examples to mention one by one. 太多的例子不胜枚举。

5. A good example to illustrate is higher divorce rate in recent years. 近年来的高离婚率就是一个能很好地证明这一点的例子。

八、对比论证

1. People holding the first view usually think that more money will bring more happiness.持第一种观点的人通常认为钱越多就越幸福。

持第一种观点的人认为年夜饭就应该在家里吃而不是在酒店。

People holding the first view think that dinner on th e new year’s eve should be taken at home instead of a hotel.

2. Quite a few people’s answer is yes. They argue electronic newspapers can be updated instantly.

相当一部分人的回答是肯定的,他们指出,电子报纸能够被及时更新。

大部分人的回答是肯定的,他们指出,年夜饭吃的就是家里温馨团圆的氛围。没有家,也就没有了所谓的家里的团圆和团圆饭。

The majo rity of people’s answer is yes. They argue the essence of dinner on new year’s eve is the atmosphere of reunion at home. Without home, there is no the so-called reunion and reunion dinner.

3. However, still others people/others think differently/do not agree with this/hold the opposite opinion. 然而,还有一些人持不同的观点。

4. Those who advocate college students’ frequent attending school activities say that these activities provide students good chances to meet more people and make more friends. 提倡大学生应该经常参加学校活动的人说,这些活动可以给学生提供更多接触他人和结交朋友的机会。

那些支持年夜饭在酒店吃的人认为,在外面吃省时省力。只要家人在一起,在哪里吃饭都不是问题。

Those who advocate dinner at new year’s eve should be taken at a hotel say that dining outside can save both time and energy. As long as all the family members are together, it is no difference where to take the dinner.

5. However, there are many others who do not favor the university campus being open to tourists. In their opinion, tourists will destroy the quiet environment and affect students’ normal study. Besides, they argue that too many tourists will add a burden to the security department of the university. 然而,有许多人并不赞成大学校园对游客开放。他们认为,游客会破坏大学的安静环境并影响学生的正常学习。此外,他们认为,太多的游客会增加大学安保的负担。

结尾段(concluding paragraph)

结尾段同开头段一样重要。该段对全文进行概括总结,或表达作者的目的、或提出建议或展望,或重申观点等,以求给读者留下完整的印象,增强文章的效果。

结尾段之句式参考

一、观点总结

1. As for me/In my view/As far as I am concerned/From my point of view/Personally, I am in favor of the charging for plastic bags.就我个人而言,我赞成塑料袋收费。

就我个人而言,我不赞成明星盲目代言各种广告。

As for me, I am not in favor of stars making all kinds of advertisement in a blind way/blindly.

2. Judging from the evidence offered, we might safely draw the conclusion that if we wish to succeed, we must remember this famous saying. 综上所述,我们可以得出这样的结论:想要成功就要牢记这一著名的习语。

综上所述,我们应该得出这样一个结论,即我们不应该假装知道我们本不知道的内容。诚实、谦虚才是应对未知问题的正确方法。

Considering the above-mentioned issues, we may safely draw a conclusion that we should never pretend to know what we don’t know. Being honest and humble is the right way to tackle unknown problems.

3. Weighing up these two arguments/the advantages and disadvantages, I think a university should be an open place. 权衡了两种观点/利弊, 我认为大学应该是一个开放的地方。

权衡两种观点,我认为应该允许大学生在宿舍做小买卖,不过需要考虑周全。

Weighing up these two arguments, I think college students should be allowed to open a shop in the dormitory on the condition that every possible side effects be carefully taken into account.

4. Considering the above-mentioned, we can conclude that it is not the opportunity itself that can decide one’s success or failure. 综上所述,我们可以得出这样的结论:机会本身并不能决定一个人的成功或失败。

5.To conclude/In a word/In sum, the exam does more good than harm.总之,考试肯定是利大于弊。

二、总结方法

1. Only in this way can we make full use of reference books. 只有这样,我们才能充分地利用参考书。

只有这样,我们才能合理利用寝室开店带来的好处并避免其缺陷。

Only in this way can we make sensible/reasonable use of the advantages brought by shops in the dormitory and at the same time avoid its drawbacks.

2. As long as both parents and children learn to think from the other side’s point of view, the conflicts between them can be avoided. 只有父母和孩子都能够从对方的角度考虑,他们之间的冲突就能够避免。

3. In a word, it takes common efforts to defeat cyber crimes. 总之,战胜网络犯罪需要我们共同的努力。

4. To reverse the trend is a tough task/not a light task, and it requires the common efforts of all citizens. 要扭转这一趋势并不容易,它需要所有公民的共同努力。

5. Only through these methods/measures could noise problem be solved fundamentally. 只有通过

这些方法和措施,噪音问题才能从根本上解决。

2013年6月英语四级作文真题三篇及范文详解

2013年6月英语四级作文真题三篇及范文详解 真题解析一: OnDoing Small Things On Doing Small ThingsOn Doing Small Things 图画的内容和构图不难:父亲和男孩子的对话,孩子说“ Dad,I am a bitworried about disposing of nuclear weapon. (爸爸,我有点担心清除核武器这个问题)”,父亲则回答“ If you can empty the dustbin, you can do anything. (如果你能把垃圾桶倒掉,你就能坐好任何事情)” ,说话间,手指着垃圾桶。 这幅图画和2012年6月的六级漫画作文非常相似,当时的图中,也是两人对话,女儿和父亲。父亲问女儿:“ Hi, sweetie, how was your school today ? (嘿,小甜心,你在今天在学校过得怎么样?)” 女儿非常冷漠的回答:“Dad,you can read all about it on my

blogs. (爹哋,你自己可以在我的博客上读到所有内容)”,然后呢,女儿拔腿出门,留下父亲一脸惊愕。 作文的第一段,要进行简单描绘图画内容,这是必须的,也是题目中强制要求的(a brief description of the picture)。描述的时候,只要把父子两的对话移植到第一段,然后把父亲手指垃圾桶的动作描绘一下就可以了,非常简单。 作文的第二段,进行主旨提炼并且论述。这幅图画很容易看出主题,那就是做大事之前,要先做小事(一屋不扫,何以扫天下),而且题目中其实早就已经透露了主题了(express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertakingsomething big。) 因此,第二段通篇论述小事做起的重要性就可以了。属于我在课堂上讲过的作文三大分类之“积极主题,论述意义” 作文第三段,总结,启发。这一段再次强调小事做起的意义,我们不能低估他的威力。文章最后可以以名人名言作为结尾。 请看范文: We can see from the cartoon that there is a father talking with hisson. Having heard his son’s words that “Dad, I am a bit worried about disposing of nuclear waste。” The father repliesthat “ If you can empty the dustbin here, you can do anything” and points the garbage can beside him。 Funny and common as the conversation sounds, it reflects that the fatherintends to advise his son to do small things before undertaking big.Definitely, doing small things is the first step of success and will lay rootfor doing something big. By doing something small, we are able to accumulateexperience, master skills and train ourselves to be more patient. In other words,we can be well prepared for further challenges in the course of

2018春季大学英语四六级作文预测辅导讲义

2018年春季大学英语四六级作文预测 第一部分写作的形式 1.字数 2.段落 3.整洁 第二部分写作的内容 第一节四六级写作核心表达 第一段核心表达: 1.生动地vividly 2.描述describe 3.图画/作者/名言/故事picture 4.显示/表明show,suggest 5.越来越多/越来越 6.关注/忽略pay attention to; 7.重要性importance 8.发人深省的 9.反映reflect 10.字幕,主题subtitle;topic 第二段核心表达: 1.现象 2.解释explain 3.如今nowadays 4.信息技术/高科技/文化information technology 5.导致/影响cause;influence 6.尝试try to do sth. 7.传递send 8.推论infer 9.吸引注意attract attention 10.必要性,至关重要,扮演角色

第三段核心表达: 1.采取措施take measures to(moves--immediate moves) 2.加强意识strengthen the awareness(enhance the consciousness) 3.制定法律/规章make laws and rules(legislation and regulation) 4.采取理性态度take a rational attitude(Take an objective attitude is vitally important.对吗?) 5.解决问题solve the problem(address the issue) 6.强调/重视emphasize(attach importance to/place importance on) 7.个人成长personal growth 8.社会发展social development 9.学业职业academic studies and career development 10.经验视野enrich our experience and broaden our horizon 第二节写作核心句法 1.As,which引导的非限 As is()depicted by the cartoon,a couple is(),()rubbish into the lake,with the()showing the()of environmental consciousness,which is () 2.同位语从句与定语从句 The picture()a phenomenon that pollution is becoming increasingly severe. This picture()a phenomenon that is well-known to us all. 3.虚拟语气 It is high time that we should take moves. It is imperative that we(should)take moves. 4.独立主格结构 Tangible is teaching,talking with her students,(). 随着社会的发展: 随着问题变得严峻: 综上所述: 5.分词与不定式(被动)作后置定语 解释问题的原因: 环境扮演的角色: 要考虑的因素:

大大学英语四级作文万能模板(四级必备)

大学英语四级作文万能模板 提纲式作文 1.对立观点式 A.有人认为X 是好事,赞成X,为什么? B.有人认为X 是坏事,反对X,为什么? C.我的看法。 Some people are in favor of the idea of doing X. They point out the fact that 支持X 的第一个原因。They also argue that 支持X 的另一个原因。 However, other people stand on a different ground. They consider it harmful to do X. They firmly point out that 反对X 的第一个理由。An example can give the details of this argument: 一个例子。 There is some truth in both arguments. But I think the advantages of X overweigh the disadvantages. In addition to the above-mentioned negative effects it might bring about, X also may X 的有一个坏处。 2.批驳观点式 A.一个错误观点。 B.我不同意。 Many people argue that 错误观点。By saying that, they mean 对这个观点的进一步解释。An example they have presented is that 一个例子。(According to a survey performed by X on a group of Y, almost 80% of them 赞成这个错误观点或者受到这个错误观点的影响)。 There might be some element of truth in these people’s belief. But if we consider it in depth, we will feel no reservation to conclude that 与错误观点相反的观点。There are a number of reasons behind my belief. (以下参照辩论文的议论文写法)。 3.社会问题(现象)式 A.一个社会问题或者现象。 B.产生的原因 C.对社会和我们生活的影响 D.如何杜绝。(如果是问题的话) E.前景的预测。 Nowadays, there exists an increasingly serious social/economic/environmental problem. (X has increasingly become a common concern of the public). According to a survey, 调查内容说明这种现象的情况。(或者是一个例子)。 There are a couple of reasons booming this problem/phenomenon. 下面参照辩论式议论文的写法。 X has caused substantial impact on the society and our daily life, which has been articulated(表达)in the following aspects. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。 A dozen of measures are supposed to take to prevent X from bringing us more harm. 参照辩论式议论文的写法。 Based on the above discussions, I can easily forecast that more and more people will ……..

英语四级基础写作6-02

1.Evidently , it is unquestionable that part-time jobs are extremely beneficial for our interpersonal skills . 兼职工作对我们的人际交往能力有利。 2.尽全力保护我们的环境是很重要的。 It is essential that we are supposed to endeavor to protect our environment. 3.An ocean of graduates find it increasingly difficult to get a decent job . 很多大学生找不到工作。 4.There is no denying that graduates in growing numbers find it increasingly difficult to get a decent job . 不可否认的是,越来越多的大学生找不到工作。 5.People fail to take into account the fact that education does not end with graduation . 人们没有考虑到教育没有随着毕业而结束这一事实。 6.Many experts point out that physical exercises contribute directly to a person's physical fitness . 许多专家指出体育锻炼直接有助于身体健康。 7.An increasing number of experts believe that migrants will have positive effects on construction of city . 越来越多的专家相信移民对城市的建设起到积极作用。 8.We should take proper measures to limit the number of foreign tourists . 我们应当采取适当的措施来限制外国旅游者的数量。 9.We should spare no efforts to protect local environment and history from the harmful effects of international tourism . 我们应当努力保护当地环境和历史,使之不受国际旅游业的不利影响。 10.There is no denying that air pollution is an extremely serious problem: the city authorities should take effective measures to deal with it . 无可否认,空气污染是一个极其严重的问题:城市当局应该采取有效措施来解决它。 重要(important) significant essential vital crucial

基础薄弱考生进行英语四级写作训练的方法

基础薄弱考生进行英语四级写作训练的方 法 基础薄弱考生进行英语四级写作训练的方法 一、背诵:首先认真研究历年四级写作真题,分析近年来四级写作的出题规律和考试重点,从语言、结构、内容三大层面,认真研读经典写作真题范文:语言方面学习范文中的精彩词汇、词组、句型;结构方面学习范文的框架结构、内在逻辑、关联词、同义替换和代词替换;内容方面学习范文的论点、论据和论证。同时背诵精彩写作范文,要求滚瓜烂熟、脱口而出、多多益善,扎扎实实提高自己的写作实力。 二、默写:背诵熟练之后默写下来,仔细对照原文,会发现你默写的文章与原文有一些语法、拼写、标点的区别,这些区别就是你的写作弱点,学习关键在于针锋突破,不要全面出击。这些弱点正是你在考试中扣分的原因所在,把这些弱点意义克服,分数自然就会提高。 三、中译英:首先将写作真题范文译为中文,或参考范文的`正确译文,然后进行中译英的工作,根据自己的理解把中文译为英文,最后对照英文原文,你会发现你的译文与原文存在较大的差别,这些差别正是你写作低分的症结所

在。同样的一个中文句子,仔细对比一下你使用了哪些词汇、词组和句型,原文使用了哪些,这样你的写作水平才会逐渐提高。 四、写作:进行完上述工作之后,在考前必须进行写作的工作,只有动笔写作,才会发现自己的问题。可以写510篇真题或模拟题,模仿自己曾经背诵过的精彩词汇、词组、句型、框架和范文,写出一篇新的文章。最初不要求速度,但考前一定要进行模考,半小时写出一篇120-150词的文章。写完之后仔细修改其中的语言错误,将其改的更加精彩。 英语写作基础不太好的四级考生,必须按照上述步骤严格进行;基础较好的考生学习顺序正好相反,首先写作,直接写作英语四级真题;其次中译英,在研读原文之前,进行中译英的工作,译完对比,找出差距;然后背诵;最后默写。同时可以准备自己的写作框架,应用文和论说文分别形成固定的写法,积累精彩句型。 【基础薄弱考生进行英语四级写作训练的方法】 1.基础薄弱如何进行英语四级写作训练 2.训练写作技巧的方法 3.关于提高中考生语文写作水平的方法 4.看图写作的方法 5.作文写作的方法

备考四级英语心得体会范文

备考四级英语心得体会范文 备考四级英语心得体会(一)四级并不可怕,比起高考来,只是在词汇量,阅读,和写作方面有些提高,只是在大学里可能对英语学习有所放松,所以不进则退了. 关于应考有几点想说说: 误区: 1. 不做真题,只做模拟题.模拟题中错误较多,题目来源也不一定权威,有可能对备考产生负面影响,这也是师兄师姐们给我们的建议 2. 一味地背单词.很多只背单词的同学往往是复习得很累又没拿到好成绩,复习时应该针对自己的弱项重点突破,最好多做阅读及全方位的练习,在考试前把对英语熟悉的语感找回来. 3. 考试时把握不好时间.考试时间很紧,很多同学没做完,应该有计划有时间观念的做,切忌漏题,最后一道玩形填空题往往不难但很多同学都来不及做针对各个部分的复习: 1. 听力: 考前半个至一个月坚持每天听真题的磁带,特别要训练自己熟悉听写段落句子题,这题算是听力部分中最难的也是我们以前做的很少的.要听写的句子往往比较长,可以写原句也可以用自己的话写大意,要边听听写完整不太可能,建议大家着重听大意,记下关键词,听完后再按关键词补充完整 2. 阅读: 占比较大的比例,有一定难度,要注意把握速度和时间 浏览问题,掌握问题信息-------通读全文---------做细节题,推论题---------做全文观点题,一般说来问题的顺序和题目答案在问中的顺序是一致的

平时练习的时候训练自己识生词的能力,对不认识的词靠上下文来识别意思,把握全文观点的能力 3. 单项选择: 复习高中时学的语法,词汇题很少,往往是历年的高频词汇反复考,推荐淘金式巧攻大学英语词汇四级分册前20单元的高频词汇总结 4. 完形填空: 先通读全文,了解大意后再仔细阅读每一小题,注意固定搭配的用法 5. 作文:很重要,6分以下的四级不能通过 ① 先理好思路再写,写个中文提纲,包括每段的大意,要条理清楚 ② 用词特别是动词要斟酌,大家都用的词你就尽量避免用,换用高级些的词汇或短语 如I think, I like, very important等太俗的词汇让阅卷老师生厌 ③ 用灵活的句型体现你对语言的驾驭能力,切忌一个句型模式从开篇到结尾没有变化,多正确的使用长句,如定语从句,主语从句等 ④ 注意文章的连贯以及小词(副词)的运用 几个好的句型: 开头:It goes ple..以为例,.. 第二段展开:But it is a pity that.但是很可惜. Ho my point of vie up,..总括言之,.. The result is dependent on.结果是依而定 备考四级英语心得体会(二)这次我终于过了,如此的艰难,但我还是咬着牙挺过了!谢谢老师和朋友!

大学英语四级作文万能模板

英语四级作文万能模板:对比观点型 (1) 要求论述两个对立的观点并给出自己的看法。 1. 有一些人认为。。。 2. 另一些人认为。。。 3. 我的看法。。。 The topic of ①-----------------(主题)is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say A is their favorite. They hold their view for the reason of ②-----------------(支持A的理由一)What is more, ③-------------理由二). Moreover, ④---------------(理由三). While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. Firstly,-----------------(支持B的理由一). Secondly (besides),⑥------------------(理由二). Thirdly (finally),⑦------------------(理由三). From my point of view, I think ⑧----------------(我的观点). The reason is that ⑨--------------------(原因). As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former is surely a wise choice . (2) 给出一个观点,要求考生反对这一观点 Some people believe that ①----------------(观点一). For example, they think ②-----------------(举例说明).And it will bring them ③-----------------(为他们带来的好处). In my opinion, I never think this reason can be the point. For one thing,④-------------(我不同意该看法的理由一). For another thing, ⑤-----------------(反对的理由之二). Form all what I have said, I agree to the thought that ⑥------------------(我对文章所讨论主题的看法). 英语四级作文万能模板:彻底批判型 With the prosperity of economy in modern society, _______主题has become a problem we have to face.The problem reflected is not rare nowadays,as we always read news that _______新闻出处.Reasons why this kind of _______现象occurs from time to time are various.One of possible causes is _______原因.It is also owing to the fact that . In any causes,however, _______这种事情可能会出现的原因could never be excuse for _______这种事情.Hence citizens/the public should _______采取什么样的措施to prevent _______这种事情的发生from occurring.Additionally,efforts of individuals/one/the public should be supplemented by _______方法,for example, _______举例说明(可有可无) ,which would be of great significance to . 英语四级作文万能模板:说明利弊题型 说明利弊这种题型往往要求先说明一下现状,再对比事物本身的利弊,有时也会单从一个角度(利或弊)出发,最后往往要求考生表明自己的态度(或对事物前景提出预测) 1. 说明事物现状 2. 事物本身的优缺点(或一方面)

四级培训基础班写作2--我的讲义汇总

四级培训基础班作文2 结构意识的培养和行文思路的提炼 1. 应试作文仍然应该保持三段式的作文模式,即开头段、中间段和结尾段。(注:详略得当,开头段和结尾段2-3句。展开段4-5句。 2. 每段话都可以遵循这样的模式,即主题句+展开句。 3.针对不同类型的作文,展开作文的思路也略有不同,有可能是从现象描述展开,有可能是观点阐述展开。(七类四级常考作文类型 4.在审题完毕之后就应该整理好作文思路,然后列出提纲,有的放矢。 开头段(opening paragraph 开头段虽短,但却是文章成败的关键,举足轻重。该段目的在于引出文章要探讨的核心问题和现象,从而起到统领全文的作用。因此,开头段,主要用于引入文章主题、介绍相关背景(原因、影响、结果等并引导正文内容。一般情况下不对内容进行深入的探讨和总结,两三句点题即可。 开头段之句式参考 一、描述现象 1. Nowadays, it has already become a common phenomenon /Currently it is not a rare phenomenon/occurrence that college students apply for a credit card. 现在,大学生办信用卡已经非常常见。 现如今,在新生入学时好几个家长打包小包簇拥着一个孩子已经变得非常常见。Nowadays,it has been a common occurrence that on the enrolling day of a college, almost every freshman is crowded around by several relatives who are holding all kinds of packages, big and small.

英语四级作文写作

记叙文题型作文 写作步骤?要求考生写一篇记叙文,描述事件发生得时间、地点、原因、人物及结果,最后对事件进行简单分析,如:2003年6月四级作文、2003年9月四级作文、2004年6月六级作文。对这类题型,通常分为三个步骤来写:?第一段、总结描述?交代清楚故事涉及得人物、时间、地点: 主题句 第二段、具体描述 具体描述事件发生得原因、经过与结果?起因+经过+结果?第三段、对事件得分析?分析句1+分析句2+分析3 记叙文题型作文写作范文练习 Directions:for this part, youareallowed thirty minutes towrite a positionon the topic the day my classmatefellill、 1、简单描述一下这位同学生病得情况;?2、同学、老师与我就是如何帮助她得; 3、人与人之间得这种相互关爱给我得感受就是、、、、?[写作模板:架构阶段] 第一段: 开篇句:about _____o'clock one eveningin_______, _____、 扩展句:________、(展开描述一下事件) ?第二段:?主题句:without hesitation,_____、it wasn't long before _____、 扩展句:1、one ______、 2、another _______、 3、our teacher_______、 第三段:?结尾句:is _______?who can tell? but ______、 扩展句:1、when____, people showed_____spiritregardless of ____、?2、this kind ofcarebetweenpersons is the very kindgiving, unselfish and priceless devotion o rsacrifice、 3、and itis justbecause of this care thatwe can have w arm families, ahappy life and abeautiful world、 [写作模板:填充阶段] 第一段: 开篇句:about nine o'clock one evening inmay, my roommate li ming was lying inbed, trembling with cold andhavinga cough、扩展句:hishead was achingso intensely that he kept groan ing、his forehead felt veryhot、we tookhis temperature、it was 38、5℃、(展开描述一下事件) 第二段: 主题句:without hesitation, i dialed "120"、it wasn't long before an ambulance arrived、?扩展句:1、oneroommate brought a blanketfor him、 2、anothersupported him in theambulance、 3、ourteacher insisted on giving him some money、?第三段: 结尾句:isheasuspedtedsars patient? who can tell ?but wedid't retreat、

大学英语四级写作精品班内部讲义

2011年春季大学英语四级(CET4)写作精品班内部讲义 主讲:白子墨 一、考纲要求 写作能力测试部分比例为15%时间为30分钟,体裁包括议论文、说明文、应用文等。 四级作文范文档的要求是:切题;表达思想清楚、文字通顺,连贯性较好;基本无语言错误,仅有个别小错。 该要求蕴涵着大学英语写作的四个基本考点: 1、切题——所谓切题是指在形式上诸如段落、字数、文体、格式等方面满足题目要求,并在内容上没有偏差。 2、表达清楚、条理清晰——要求考查学生对文章结构的掌握,要求文章主题观点明确,有头有尾,论证说明安排有主次,有轻重。 3、文字通顺,连贯性较好——要求考查学生对过渡句和连接词或词组的掌握和运用,要求文章句子内部与句子之间通顺连贯,不突兀。 4、基本无语言错误——要求考查学生语言基本功的掌握,包括语法与拼写两部分。 ◆一篇好的作文应基本达到: 有较好的写作基础,文章流畅,遣词造句恰当,文章结构完整,内容符合要求;语法基本正确; 句法基本准确,句子与句子,段落与段落之间过渡连贯; 有一定词汇量,字数符合要求; 说理清楚,内容充实。 ◆一篇较差的作文表现为: 文章不通顺,无段落,无结构,无明显主题; 出现很多基本语法错误,拼写错误; 词汇量很小,词不达意,缺乏英语表达能力; 不像一篇文章,仅是把一些不连贯的词语拼凑到一起。 因此,要想写出一篇高分作文必须具备两个条件: 一是扎实的英语语言基础,二是掌握一定的写作技巧。 二、应试瓶颈

◆无从下笔 ◆结构杂糅 ◆错误连篇 ◆逻辑混乱 ◆文不切题 ◆用语平淡 三、四大对策 ◆卷面设计 ◆写作内容 ◆行文逻辑 ◆遣词造句 四、真题回顾 ◆ 2006年6月 1、有些大学允许学生自由选择某些课程的任课教师; 2、学生选择教师时所考虑的主要因素; 3、学生自主任课教师的益处和可能产生的问题。 ◆ 2006年12月 1、许多人喜欢在除夕夜观看春节晚会; 2、但有些人提出取消春节晚会; 3、我的看法。 ◆ 2007年6月 1、本社团活动的主要内容; 2、参加本社团活动的好处; 3、如何加入本社团。 ◆ 2007年12月 1、各大学开设了各种各样的选修课; 2、学生因为各种原因选择了不同的选修课; 3、以你自己为例…。 ◆ 2008年6月 1、娱乐活动多种多样; 2、娱乐活动可能使人们受益,也可能有危害性; 3、作为大学生我的看法。 ◆ 2008年12月 1、一次性塑料袋曾广为使用; 2、由此带来的问题; 3、限制使用一次性塑料袋的意义。 ◆ 2009年6月 1、越来越多的博物馆免费开放,目的是什么; 2、也会带来一些问题;

大学英语四级写作讨论观点类作文模板

大学英语四级写作讨论观点类作文模板 (1) 模版1 Different people have different views on_____.Some people think that_____,whereas others aegue that __________. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the opinion that ___________.For one thing,I firmly believe that ___________.For another,_____________.Just think of________,who/which_______. Taking all these factors into consideration,we may safely come to the conclusion that______.Only if_______can we _______,just as the saying goes,________________. (2)模版2 In recent years there have been many reports of ________.It turns a new chapter of _________in China,and will have far-reaching effects in the forthcoming years. The biggest benefit,in my eyes,is that_______.In addition,_______.Finally,______________. Apart from the benefits mentioned above,we should also face several unavoidable challenges.In the first place,_____________.In the second place,________.What’s more,_______________.In summary,we should_______________.

四级基础写作handout

第一讲:经典语汇汇总 十大功能语汇: A:表示“观点” -maintain/assume —emphasize/insist —argue/hold 造句:很多人认为,健康对于幸福生活而言是必不可少的(essential)。我同意他们的观点。 —in my point of view —when it comes to me —for my part —as for me 造句:面对这种问题,我认为,我们需要考虑两点。 B:表示“重视” —attach importance to —give weight to —devote much attention to 造句:政府应该非常重视这个问题。 C:表示“强调” —lay(put/place) emphasis on —lay(put/place) stress on —lay(put/place) weight on 造句:政府应该强调“希望工程”(the Project of Hope)的重要性。 D:表示“赞同”;“支持” —approve of (赞同) —stand by (支持) —vote for (投票赞成) —hold with(赞成) 造句:有些人认为真正的友谊基于相似的爱好(similar interests) E:表示“反对” —disapprove of —object to

—be opposed to 造句:很少有人反对这个观点。 F:表示“努力” —make every effort to do —many efforts should be made to do —devote to —endeavor to do —do one’s utmost to do 造句:我们应该努力结束任何虚假承诺(fake promise)的行为。 G:表示“建议” —propose —put forward —suggest —advance 造句:我建议每个人都可以保护民族文化的独立性(independence)和独特性(uniqueness) H:表示:“原因” —owing to —thanks to —for the sake of —due to 造句:鱼类数量变得极稀少(rare),因为先进渔船(advanced fishing-ship)的数量急剧增长。 I:表示“决心” —choose to do —resolve to do —be determined to do —be convinced to do 造句:各行各业的人们(people from all works of life )决定资助(finance)那些上不起学的年轻人(youngsters who can not afford to go to school)。 J:表示“结论” —come to the conclusion that —arrive at a conclusion that —conclude that

英语四级作文写作技巧

四级作文类型 Argument---议论型作文from others' eyes 2000 年6 月/ my view 1998 年6 月/ A & D 1996 年1 月Explain---解释说明性作文hot issue 沙尘暴sand storm 96 年6 月98 年1 月 Graph & Picture 四六级从来没有考过图话题02 年6 月 名言警句题Practice makes perfect. Haste makes waste. Information---通知型作文(书信)02 年1 月 Description---描述型作文04 年6 月 写好主题句 主题句:放在段首的,反映段落中心思想的,起引导和限制作用的句子。 主题句的要求 主题句要有明确的导向。 The 'Transformers' is very interesting. I do moning exercise every day. 主题句越具体越好。 People try to improve their health. People try many ways to improve their health. 主题句越漂亮越好。 不能有错,句型要漂亮,句式多样化。但是物极必反。 句法和句型: 写出最基本的正确的句子你就可以拿到8-11 分的档 What is the most important factor of a sentence for the first step? Correct! (Right) or (Wrong) He has three sons, most of them are middle school students. ☆五大简单句基本句型:主+谓;主+谓+宾;主+谓+宾+补;主+谓+宾+宾;主+系+表 ☆如何在正确写出短句的基础上把句子加长? 方法一:写并列句(compound sentence ) 并列句:两个或者两个以上的简单句通过连词连接起来的句子。 方法二:写复合句(complex sentence ) 三种针对上文错句的改法: He has three sons. Most of them are middle school students. He has three sons, and most of them are middle school students. He has three sons, most of whom are middle school students. 复合句的概念引入 定语从句 状语从句

英语四级考试写作全攻略:备考四大步骤

英语四级考试写作全攻略:备考四大步骤 根据教育部高等教育司2004年公布的最新《大学英语课程教学要求》,四级写作要求如下:“能完成一般性写作任务;能描述个人经历、观感、情感和发生的事件等;能写常见的应用文;能就一般性话题或提纲在半小时内写出120个词的短文,内容基本完整,用词恰当,语意连贯;能掌握基本的写作技能。” 同时,四级写作要求:“能填写常见的表格,如注册表、申请表、问卷调查表等;能写给或回复他人祝贺卡、生日卡、邀请信、便条、短信、通知等;能写简单的指示语、个人广告、社团海报、个人简历等;能简要描述个人经历、发生的事件、读过的故事、观看的影片、喜怒哀乐等情感,写出或回答个人或公司的信函、电子邮件、传真等。” 根据我们多年的教学经验,四级写作备考可分为四大步骤: 一、背诵:首先认真研究历年四级写作真题,重点研究2001年6月—2005年12月的11次真题,分析近年来四级写作的出题规律和考试重点,从语言、结构、内容三大层面,认真研读经典写作真题范文:语言方面学习范文中的精彩词汇、词组、句型;结构方面学习范文的框架结构、内在逻辑、关联词、同义替换和代词替换;内容方面学习范文的论点、论据和论证。同时背诵精彩写作范文,要求滚瓜烂熟、脱口而出、多多益善,扎扎实实提高自己的写作实力。 二、默写:背诵熟练之后默写下来,仔细对照原文,会发现你默写的文章与原文有一些语法、拼写、标点的区别,这些区别就是你的写作弱点,学习关键在于针锋突破,不要全面出击。这些弱点正是你在考试中扣分的原因所在,把这些弱点意义克服,分数自然就会提高。 三、中译英:首先将写作真题范文译为中文,或参考范文的正确译文,然后进行中译英的工作,根据自己的理解把中文译为英文,最后对照英文原文,你会发现你的译文与原文存在较大的差别,这些差别正是你写作低分的症结所在。同样的一个中文句子,仔细对比一下你使用了哪些词汇、词组和句型,原文使用了哪些,这样你的写作水平才会逐渐提高。 四、写作:进行完上述工作之后,在考前必须进行写作的工作,只有动笔写作,才会发现自己的问题。可以写5—10篇真题或模拟题,模仿自己曾经背诵过的精彩词汇、词组、句型、框架和范文,写出一篇新的文章。最初不要求速度,但考前一定要进行模考,半小时写出一篇120-150词的文章。写完之后仔细修改其中的语言错误,将其改的更加精彩。 英语写作基础不太好的四级考生,必须按照上述步骤严格进行;基础较好的考生学习顺序正好相反,首先写作,直接写作四级真题;其次中译英,在研读原文之前,进行中译英的工作,译完对比,找出差距;然后背诵;最后默写。同时可以准备自己的写作框架,应用文和论说文分别形成固定的写法,积累精彩句型。 针对2006年6月的四级考试,建议大家论说文重点准备关于大学校园生活的话题,如学习、生活、社会工作、兼职打工等;应用文重点准备咨询信、投诉信、介绍信、请求信、建议信、道歉信、邀请信等私人和公务信函,以及开幕词、祝酒辞等致辞的写法。 多读、多写、多改,写作高分不是梦!

相关文档
最新文档