四级作文讲义
Diagram of an Essay
Title of the essay
Introduction opening remarks to catch reader’s interest; thesis statement
Body Topic sentence 1 (supporting point 1 )
Topic sentence 2 (supporting point 2)
Topic sentence 3 (supporting point 3)
Conclusion summary (optional); General concluding remarks
Beginning
引言/起始/淘金段，图标图画描述段，3句
1.General description: 概述句，总体描述（1句）
1) It is well known that…
2) It goes without saying that
3) It is quite clear that…
4)It has been found that…
5)It is believed that…
6) Nowadays, there follows a craze for…
7) As more and more people f ocus on…, …draw more and more attention from the public.
8) …has witnessed an unprecedented tide of…
2. Details：挖掘细节词、联结成句（1句）
?Question
?Quotation
?Exemplification
?Definition
?Contrast
?Statistics
?Background
引用句式：As the saying/proverb goes/says…
As Mark Twain puts it…
Earnest Hemingway once remarked…
It is widely accepted that…
对比：in sharp contrast, by/in contrast
?on the contrary
?rather than/otherwise/unlike
?whereas, conversely, yet
?while, however, but
数据：The table shows the changes in the number of… over the period from…to…
?According to the figures/indicators given in the graph,…
?The table gives the information that…
?It can been seen from the chart that…
表格图：table
饼状图：pie chart/graph
柱状图(条形图)：bar/column chart, histogram
直线图(曲线图)：line chart/graph; curve diagram
增加：increase/raise/rise/surge/climb/soar
on the rise/go up/gain a momentum/continue its upward trend 减少：decrease/drop/fall/descend/decline/reduce
go down/on the decline/drop off/continue its downward trend 程度逐渐增加：slightly-slowly-gradually-moderately-considerably-
greatly-rapidly-sharply-dramatically
小波动：a minor fluctuation/small rise and fall/up and down
3. Theme: 立论句，主题（1句）
Body
Topic sentence (1句)symbolic meaning
Argument (3句) 论据：原因、解释、论证
?Five angles
?Six devices
?Facts Relation
(1) Five angles:
Background政治、经济、文化和社会背景
E.g. Idol Worship
1) With globalization, idol worship is extremely popular among the adolescents.
2) With the speedy social, economic and cultural development, young people in
expanding numbers adore superstars.
Facts
e.g.
1)There is no denying the fact that a great many fans worship pop singers, film
and sports stars.
2)Actually, it is common to see the worship of idols among young people. Others’ Opinions
?To begin with, the purpose of the topic is to show us that…yet the symbolic meanings subtly conveyed should be taken more seriously.
?What the topic conveys goes far beyond only a…Instead, it carries…meanings.
The fact that…
Reasons
?Owing to the quickening pace of life, competition goes increasingly fierce in all walks of life, stimulating everyone to pursue one goal after another. Consequence
Once the young people begin to seek independence and accept challenges from the real world, they are found too spoiled to be strong enough in the face of challenges.
(2) Six Devices
?Enumeration
?Exemplification
?Classification
?Comparison & Contrast
?Cause & Consequence
?Chronological order
1)列举法：
主旨句：
a. Now people in growing/ever-increasing/significant numbers are beginning to
believe/realize/recognize/understand/see/be aware that…
b. My argument for this view goes as follows:
c. We should take a more critical view of…
列举例句：
?First(ly)…,second(ly)…,third(ly)…,lastly/finally…
?In the first place…,in the second place…,last but no least…
?First of all/first and foremost…,then…, next…, lastly…
?To begin with…, what’s more/moreover/furthermore…
?Most important of all…, moreover…, finally…
?On the one han d…, on the other hand…
2)举例法
主旨句：
?Common sense tells us that…
?What is worth noticing is…
?History is filled with the examples…
?The story is not rare, and it is one of many examples.
举例用句：
?For example/instance
?Take…as an example/an illustration/for example
? A case in point
?Namely/that is/in other words
?especially/in particular
?exemplify/illustrate/prove/indicate
3)分类法
e.g. Topic: Certificate Craze
Topic Sentence:
Admittedly, there are different purposes behind this phenomenon.
?Some people aim at certificates because of the employment pressure.
?However, some others consider all the diploma and certificates important standards by which a person’s ability can be measured.
?Moreover, there are those who just want to enrich their life by preparing for the certificates because they really enjoy their progress.
递进关系词：Furthermore
?What’s more
?In addition
?Besides
?Also
?Next
4)比较对比法—相同点和不同点
主旨句：There is probably some truth on both sides.
…is both a blessing and a curse for mankind.
Everything has double folds.
There is a good side and a bad side to everything, and that includes…
相同：Both…and, equally important
Have…in common
In the same way, just as, that is
The same as, likewise, similarly
Like, correspondingly
不同：On the contrary
Rather than/otherwise/unlike
Whereas/conversely/yet
While/however/but/nevertheless
Compared to/in comparison with
In/by contrast
5)原因和结果
e.g. Topic: Due Attention Should Be Given To Spelling
Topic Sentence:
There are possibly three reasons contributing to this phenomenon.
?First, exam-oriented education makes the students pay less attention to spelling.
?Second, some teachers should also be responsible for it because they don’t emphasize the importance of spelling during teaching.
?Last but not least, some students are too lazy to recite words.
原因主旨句
?There are many/different reasons/causes for this dramatic/significant change/growth/decline/increase in…
? A number of factors could account for/contribute to/lead to/result in…
?One may attribute/owe…to, but…is not by itself an adequate explanation.
影响主旨句
?It will have/exert/produce a far-reaching/decisive/profound/beneficial effect/influence/impact on…
?It gives rise to/leads to/brings about/results in/creates a host of problems.
6)时间法
At the present time until now
At the same time later
Presently meanwhile
Soon afterwards
Beforehand sooner or later
In due time eventually
At this point currently
Summary (1句)
小结，1句，首尾呼应
e.g. Briefly speaking, young people are inclined to idolize the people who excel in appearance, intelligence or talent.
Conclusion
结尾句/建议、评论/展望未来
结尾句
开头模板
?In general/generally speaking
?In fact/conclusion/short/brief/summary
?On the whole/all in all/as a general whole
?To sum up/to conclude/some extent
?As far as I am concerned/as for me
?In the finally analysis/in a nutshell
1) Hence,…, the thought-provoking social phenomenon is a double-edged sword which can exert profound influence on…
2) As a consequence, it is imperative for us to take effective/drastic measures/actions.
3) I assume this hard nut can be cracked if both …and … take effective steps.
4) From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw/reach/come to/arrive at the conclusion that…
5)Judging from all evidence offered, we may safely conclude that…
6)To reverse the trend is not an easy job, and it requires/demands/involves a
different state of mind towards…
建议和评论：
7) It is my view that first of all….Meanwhile, there are good reasons to advocate…in the long run.
8) On the one hand, we can….On the other hand, …should be sensible enough to…
9) To begin with, relevant laws and regulations should be made to severely punish those who….In addition, we should cultivate the awareness of the young that…
收尾：特殊句型
(1)倒装句；
(2)强调句；
(3)虚拟语气；
(4)反问句。
10) To conclude my essay, I would like to quote an old saying…
11) To achieve this goal, however, we still have a great distance to cover.
12) It is hoped/suggested/recommended that great/persistent/sustained efforts should be made to control/check/promote…
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