【英语】英语中考英语书面表达专题(word)

【英语】英语中考英语书面表达专题（word）

一、中考英语书面表达（含答案详细解析）

1．书面表达

地球是我们的家园，我们作为地球的主人，就应该好好保护地球。现在正在倡导“低碳”生活，只要我们不污染地球的环境，不浪费地球的能源，就能够让我们的周围变得更绿，生活变得更美好。作为中学生，我们应该怎样做呢？谈谈你的想法。内容应该包括以下几点：

1. 节约用水、用电；

2. 节约纸张，循环使用旧课本，保护森林；

3. 节约粮食，在更多的土地上种树；

4. 不乱丢杂物，保护环境；

要求：短文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；80词左右

提示词：the greenhouse gases lifestyle 低碳生活方式

How does our earth turn better?

The earth is our home. _______________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we are living will be better and better.【答案】How does our earth turn better?

The earth is our home. We should protect our earth as the owner. But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?

I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. When you wash, can you close down the water? Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? I think saving paper is necessary. All the used text books should be recycled. Thus, less trees won't be cut down again. If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm. Don't throw litter everywhere, it will pollute our environment.

If everyone can make a contribution to our earth, the lift we living will be better and better.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如how to do，live in，around us， such as，as a middle school student，and so on，close down the water，turn off the lights，cut down，make a contribution to our earth，pollute our environment，better and better等。而固定结构But how to live in the greenhouse gases lifestyle?和I think as a middle school student, we should save the resources around us, such as the water, the electricity and so on. /Can you turn off the lights when you left the classroom? / If we can save more food, the peasants will plant more trees on their farm.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得

到较高的分数。

2．你有没有因为没能好好管理时间而影响了学习的经历?请你写一篇文章谈谈这件事及你的看法。

内容包括：1.你没完成学习任务的经历（事情，原因及后果）；2.针对如何管理好时间给出几点建议。

作文要求：1.短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥。2.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。

3.词数80个左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my

study.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________

【答案】Once, I couldn't make good use of time and it had a bad influence on my study.

I had an experience like this. Last weekend, my good friend, Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game. It was interesting. So I spent more time on it. I forgot to do my homework in the end. My teachers and parents were angry with me. I was also upset.

How to make good use of our time? I think we should make a weekday plan. We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. It can help us to remember what we have to do next.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如make good use of，last weekend，how to do，play a game，a kind of，spent more time on，forget to do，in the end，be angry with，be going to do，on the paper，put up等。而特殊非谓语动词结构Jim taught me how to play a kind of computer game.和I think we should make a weekday plan. /We should write what we are going to do on the paper, mark the deadline of each thing clearly and put the paper up somewhere we can see it easily. /It can help us to remember what we have to do next.等复杂从句结构的运用，丰富了短文内容，使表达多样化，是本文的亮点。在学习中注意总结牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章表达更有逻辑性，也更富有条理。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要

尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

3．世界卫生组织的一项研究报告显示，我国青少年近视率居世界第一。2019年全国两会当中“小眼镜”成关注重点，防控青少年近视迫在眉睫。以下表格是学校针对本校学生近视问题做的调查表，假如你是校报编辑Jack，请根据所提供的信息，用英语写一篇调查报告，陈述学校调查结果，并表明你自己的观点和理由。

参考词汇：近视 nearsighted

注意： 1. 内容须包括所提示的信息，可适当发挥；

2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 词数：80-100，开头已经给出，不计入总词数。

According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in

China.__________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______

【答案】According to a survey carried out by WHO, the number of teenagers who are nearsighted is the largest in China. As we all know that the eyes are very important for us. So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. But do you know how to protect your eyesight？First, don't keep your eyes work for a long time. Don't spend too much time on mobile phones, TV and computers. Secondly, pay attention to the following: Don't read in the sun; don't read in bed or in a moving bus. And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. And thirdly, do eye-exercises every day. You should eat more carrots and other eye-

friendly foods. It will also help you keep good eyesight. I think, you may prevent your eyesight from becoming nearsighted.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇材料作文，根据表格中的相关信息介绍一下如何保护视力。所提供的表格中列举了近视的原因和建议。主要从原因和建议两个方面去介绍。时态为一般现在时。注意作文中必须包含表格上的所有信息，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中要注意使用祈使句，使上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

So it is important for everyone to keep good eyesight. 所以保持良好的视力对每个人都很重要。

本题运用句型：It is +形容词+for sb. to so sth.

【高分句型二】

And when you read you should keep the book away from your eyes for about a foot. 当你读这本书的时候，你应该把它从你的眼睛里移开一英尺。

when you read是由when引导的时间状语从句。

4．“inspire” 一词的汉语解释是“激励；鼓舞；赋予灵感；或启发思考”等。请以“The person who inspired me”为题写一篇不少于 80 词的短文，向校报的英语园地投稿。

要点： 1. What kind of person is he/ she？

2. How did he/ she inspire you？

要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。

2. 语言流畅，字迹清楚。

【答案】The person who inspired me

Many people around gave me deep impressions. They helped me, encouraged me and inspired me. But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.

Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes. He doesn't talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face. He is warm-hearted and ready to help others. If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out. As a good student, he studies very hard. In the early morning, you can see him stand near a tree and read English intensively. Few students can arrive at school as early as he is. He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and ping-pang. He got the first prize in last year's ping-pang competition.

You can see the good personality and the spirit of persistence in this small body. He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们以The person who inspired me为题，介绍一个曾经激励过你的人。题目中用问题的形式给予了提示，审题可知，短文应包括两个部分的内容：首先介绍这个激励

过你的人是谁，他是怎样的一个人；然后介绍他是如何激励你的。学生们可以这两个问题为提纲，发挥想象力，充实细节信息，组织语言，连贯成文。短文应以一般现在时和一般过去时为主来叙述，人称是第三人称和第一人称，注意谓语动词形式的变化。写作时应注意：首先要符合题目要求，包括题目中要求的所有信息，不能遗漏要点，可以适当发挥，注意上下文的衔接。其次应注意英语表达习惯和汉语的不同，不要按照汉语思维逐词翻译。应该从句子的整体结构入手，写完整的句子。可以简单句结构为主，辅以并列句、复合句。为提升文章档次，应使用高级词汇以及复杂结构。同时语句之间使用恰当的连接成分使文意连贯、自然。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，介绍了一个曾经激励过自己的人。短文有以下几个优点：首先文章内容完整，层次清晰，短文分三段，第一段先介绍了这个人是谁，第二段描写了这个人身上的品质以及对自己的应选；最后一段结尾。各部分内容安排合理，主次分明。其次短文中使用了正确的人称和时态，文章以第三人称和第一人称为主来叙述，主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，动词形式变化准确，注意了第三人称单数形式以及过去式形式的变化，语法规范。用词准确，语言得体，句式结构完整，符合英语的表达习惯。短文中使用了一些较好的句型和短语，如But the person who inspired me most, I think, is my friend Wang Peng.、Wang Peng is a small thin boy with two big black eyes.、He doesn't talk too much, but always keeps a smile on his face.、If I need any help for my math exercises, he is always the one that can help me out.、He also does well in many sports, such as badminton and ping-pang.、He is my idol and I wish I could be a student as good as he is.等等。

5．书面表达

初中即将毕业，同学们都感到压力很大。就此问题，老师要求你在英语课上做一个以“Less Pressure Makes Life Better”为题的报告，谈谈你的做法，与同学分享经验。请根据以下要求写一份发言稿，内容包括：

1. 普遍存在的压力：同学关系；考试

2. 我过去的压力：父母的期望；学习

3. 我成功缓解压力的办法及效果；……

要求：1. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；

2. 词数80左右，短文的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Less Pressure Makes Better Life

Hello, everyone!

Pressure is a serious problem in today’s world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. _____

_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________

_______________________________________________________________________________ _____________

【答案】Hello, my classmates!

Pressure is a serious problem in today's world. Most students in our class are under too much pressure. Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.

I was always under pressure, too. My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class. They always sent me to all kinds of after-classes on weekends.

I had a talk with my parents and told them I had done my best. Finally, they understood me. In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies.

Less pressure makes better life. Thank you.

【解析】

【详解】

这篇作文要求我们针对现在同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象，以Less Pressure Makes Life Better为题，谈谈自己的看法，和同学们分享一下自己的经验。审题可知，文章中应主要包括以下几个内容：首先介绍同学们普遍感到压力这种现象；然后讲述自己过去曾面对的压力；最后介绍自己如何成功缓解压力。题目中只给出了大概的提纲，其中具体的内容应由学生们自己发挥想象力来补充，并用正确的英语表达出来。学生们可以从自身的经历和体会出发，选取生活中常见的场景进行介绍。文章应使用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意根据表达的需要使用正确的时态，并变化谓语动词的正确形式。句式结构可以简单句结构为主，这样的句式表达简洁、明了，易于掌握。但为提升作文档次，应穿插使用并列句和复合句，或使用一些复杂结构，如非谓语动词、被动语态等。语句之间使用恰当的连接成分，使文意连贯。

【点睛】

这是一篇优秀的作文，短文作者根据题目要求，谈了自己对同学们普遍感到压力大这种现象的看法，并分享了自己的经历。短文有如下几个优点：首先短文内容完整，包含了题目中要求的所有信息，且层次清晰，文章分成了四段，每一段的中心话题也很明确。其次短文中使用了正确的时态和人称，文章主要使用了一般现在时和一般过去时，谓语动词形式准确。句式结构以简单句为主，叙述清晰、简洁。也使用了并列句和复合句的结构，如宾语从句、状语从句等。短文中使用了丰富的句式，如Some students can't get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much.、My parents wanted me to be the top student in my class、In this way, I feel less stressed out so that I can concentrate more on my studies等等。

6．书面表达

根据下列表格的提示，写一篇题为Changes in Our Hometown的英语短文．（80词左右）

文章内容必须包含所给的所有信息．开头已给出，不计入总词数．

内容要点：

Changes in Our Hometown

In the past ten years，great changes have taken place in our hometown．

【答案】Changes in Our Hometown

In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in our hometown. In the past, there used to be old houses. The river was very dirty. The roads were narrow and the living conditions were terrible. People were not rich. They went to work on foot or by bike. But now, there are many tall buildings in our hometown. We can see the clean river and the clear water . Even we can see fish in the water. There are many wide and clean roads. Our life is better and better The environment around us is more and more comfortable. People usually go to work by bus or by car.

I am glad to see these great changes in my hometown. But I think it’s still important to remember the past. It tells that we should cherish the present life.

【解析】

【详解】

亮点说明：这篇习作的层次清晰，内容饱满，表达流畅。文中使用了非常好的短语，例如take place，in our hometown，in the past，used to be，go to do，on foot，by bike，better and better，more and more等。而I think it's still important to remember the past/It tells that we should cherish the present life.等宾语从句结构的运用，丰富了习作内容，使表达多样，是本文的最大亮点。

【点睛】

书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文。它要求将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确表达意思的能力。所以，考生不能遗漏要点，要尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、短语和句式，尽可能使用高级词汇和较复杂的句式结构以便得到较高的分数。

7．4月23日是“世界读书日”，你校英语俱乐部正在开展主题为“多读书，读好书”的活动。

假如你是李华，请你写一封倡议书，向全体同学发出号召。内容包括：应该读什么样的书，以及读书的意义。

提示词语：story, novel, knowledge, improve, important

提示问题：● What kind of books should we read? ● Why do we read?

Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming.

So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.

Li Hua

【答案】例文

Dear students, the World Reading Day is coming. As a middle school student, everyone should read books. Firstly, reading increases our knowledge and we can learn the world affairs without going out. Secondly, reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills. Finally, reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future. Therefore, start to reading, no matter how old you are and what you are doing.

So I’m here again to call on all of us to read more books and read good books.

Li Hua 【解析】

【详解】

题干解读：该题目属于应用文写作，但写作时要按照应用文格式写，写作时承接短文开头，写出对学生的倡议。

例文点评：例文采用的是一段式，写的是阅读的好处，时态采用的是一般现在时，描述倡议时，描写细致，条理清晰。

高分亮点：

短语：Firstly；Secondly；Finally；a good way to do sth；broaden our knowledge and horizon。

句型：reading is a good way to improve reading and writing skills；reading can broaden our knowledge and horizon, which is important to job hunting in the future。

8．写作

某英文网站的“ Student Life”栏目正在向中学生征文，标题为“ A time when I made someone happy”，请你写一篇英文稿件，内容需包括以下要点:

1. Who was the person you made happy?

2. When was it?

3. What did you say or do?

4. Why did it make him/her happy?

5. How did you feel at that moment?

注意：1．词数：100左右（题目不计入总词数）。

2.文中不得出现可能透考生真实身份的任何信息。

【答案】Last summer,though it was hot,I volunteered to teach children English in rural

area.When I arrived there,I couldn't adjust to the weather and life style.However,as time went by,I found myself quite happy when I saw the students I was teaching made great progress.In order to teach them,I had to keep on learning as well.As a result,my English improved a lot.Also,I made friends with some of my students.We are still keeping in touch by letter now.

In a word,not only did I help those in need,but also I myself learn a lot that summer.If I have another chance to do volunteer work,I am ready to go.

【解析】写作分析：这是一篇给定标题的材料作文，需要逐条完成要点问题的回答，描述一次自己让别人开心快乐的经历，是一篇记叙文，首先要读懂5个问题，其次要用恰当的语言和衔接手段把这五个问题的回答联系在一起，变成一篇短文，同时也要注意在描述过去的故事的时候要正确运用过去时态。

写作亮点：既然这是一篇记叙文，就应该完整地呈现故事，需要加上必要的背景，指明时间（Last summer），地点（in rural area），简要概括事件（teach children English），这是文章首句的点睛之笔，信息量丰富。短语和固定搭配的正确使用也为这篇文章增色不少，例如“adjust to…”（调整以适应…），“as time went by”（随着时间的流逝），“made great progress”（取得巨大进步），“keep on learning”（继续学习），“In a word”（总而言之）等等短语使用正确。在收尾部分表达了作者积极的人生态度，表示如果还有机会自己还乐于参与，这样使得这篇文章结构完整，表意更加清晰。

9．李华的英国笔友Jessica来信说, 她想了解中国的传统节日中秋节。假如你是李华, 请你给Jessica写一封信, 介绍该节日。内容须包含以下所有要点：

1. 中秋节的时间；

2. 中秋节的传统习俗及庆祝方式：全家人一起吃饭, 赏月, 吃月饼等；

3, 我最期待的活动。

要求：1.80--100词〔开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数）；2.语句通顺, 意思连贯, 书写工整。

Dear Jessica,

I'm glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to

you.___________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua 【答案】Dear Jessica,

I'm glad to hear from you. Now let me introduce the Mid-Autumn Festival to you. The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the 8th lunar month. It’s a big day for us Chinese people. All the family members get together to celebrate the festival. In the evening, we usually have a big dinner. And then we go outside and enjoy the full moon. The moon that night looks the brightest. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together to eat mooncakes, and share our stories. For me, the best part is to enjoy the moon and eat mooncakes. Mooncakes taste very delicious. They look like the moon, big and round.

Yours,

Li Hua 【解析】

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本篇写作是以书信的方式向笔友介绍中国的传统节日中秋节，要用一般现在时来写。全文可分两大部分，第一部分写中秋节的时间、传统习俗及庆祝方式，第二部分写我最期待的活动。

亮点说明：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好地完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态，主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，如get together，enjoy the full moon， share our stories等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，句子通顺，行文连贯。

10．现在智能手机（smartphone）越来越普及，很多中学生都有智能手机。请你根据下面的提示，写一篇不少于80词的英语短文，谈一谈你对智能手机的看法，可适当发挥。

提示：1、在生活中你用智能手机做什么？

2、智能手机对你的生活产生了怎样的影响？

3、你对中学生使用智能手机有什么看法？

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【答案】例文：The smartphone is becoming more and more popular nowadays .I also have a smartphone .I usually use it to send text messages, play games,watch videos, listen to music and learn English .It is very useful and convenient. In fact,the smartphone makes my life colorful. However ,every coin has two sides.Sometimes I spend too much time playing games on the

smartphone and get bad results in exams.

So I think we students should use our smartphones properly and don’t use them too much .We should pay more attention to our studies.

【解析】

【详解】

这是一篇给材料作文，要求根据内容提示，写一篇英语短文，谈一谈你对智能手机的看法。文章时态主要用一般现在时，人称主要用第一、第三人称。首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作。在写作时，注意连句成篇，保持文章的连贯性，要层次清楚，要点分明，中心突出。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，最好不要写太长的复合句；尽量选取简单的易拼写的单词，确保正确率；词汇、句式要丰富多样，可以为文章增色添彩。最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。